�Shadow People�

You deal with the innards of machines
I love and hate the human emotions
You may think you see me out of the corner of your eye-
The part where the blood and the lashes lay

But I move in a different speed
So are you faster or slower than me?

 

Reviews

[Amy Lou]

Intensity.

This piece seems to challenge the walking and unseen dead.

Magical and metaphysical.

Bang on!
Amy Lou

[Six Impossible Things]

This is certainly something to read over and over again. Each time pulling something new from it. So sharp and spot on. Not one wasted word-- they all pack punch.
Well done. Makes me want to yell :)

[TL Boehm]

wow. for the succinctness of this piece it is a gem. I am impressed and this piece made me stop in my tracks for a moment....and read again.

[Crap!]

Nice poem and an interesting concept.