The Difference Between Free Will and Being Free

A piece about smart and dumb people, basically...

There is a difference between you and I

You run, I walk

You're half-witted, I'm of intellect

You quit, I keep going

It gets worse, It gets better

 

There is a difference between you and I

You let go, I hold tight

You don't shut up, I know when it's enough

You're consumed by your own insanity

I'm coherent and have yet to lose my mind

 

There is a differnce between the moon and the sun

The land and the sky

The Earth and the Universe

Between Heaven and hell

 

But you're in hell

Not free

Your bound by the belligerence of the chains

That hold you underneath

 

An underlying secret

You hide from all the rest

A secret of disgrace

Displeasure

Hatred

Vile feelings

 

Ranting on about your nonchalance and idiocracy

About your free will to do anything you want

But you are bent in your own guilt

Your own doubt

Your own displeasure

Your own shame and sorrow

 

The hell with your ignorance

Because you don't the meaning of actually be free...

 

...So screw you

Author's Note

I got bored so this is sort of a "vent". I like to express my feelings through writing, of course. And about that "screw you" part in. I didn't want to curse.

Reviews

[Aven]

I sense a flood emotions behind the gloss of educated restraint... to tell someone off in a graceful manner is an art in itself, very well written!

[Somebody you've already..]

it's good a little different but good.I like it and on your bio u said u procrastonated so you missed a contest right me too just got lazy i guess.lol.ttfn