Cloudy Days

Cloudy Days

A Poem by Amanda
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I'm really proud of how this turned out, I hope you enjoy. About keeping your head up even when you can't see the sun.

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You had the perfect day planned,
Everything would go alright,
But all your plans are canned,
There’s only darkness in sight.
When you woke up this morning,
The rain chilled you through,
Made your fun boring,
And canceled whatever you wanted to do.

You tried to see the sun,
But there’s only cloudy days ahead,
No one but you gets this special treatment,
No one else has heads filled with lead.

You finally got up your courage,
To ask your love out,
But you lost it and had to forage,
For the hope that was replaced with doubt.
When you find it, its too late,
They only have sunny skies,
For a perfect, wonderful date,
You only get more lies.

You try to see the sun,
But there’s only cloudy days ahead,
No one but you get this special treatment,
No one else has heads filled with lead.

You’re feeling real alone,
It seems life is your bane,
When you’re soaked to the bone,
From all this constant rain.
And just when it’s all too much,
You’re able to find hope,
A weakness in this too strong clutch,
Because, you, my friend, know how to cope.

You can see the sun now too,
If only for a little while,
No one else gets this special treatment,
No one else can have an upward spiral…
But you.

© 2012 Amanda


Author's Note

Amanda
Yeah, so this was inspired my Kaylee and I's recent conversation. I hope you enjoyed reading it as much as I did writing it. Please review! :)

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I love the way you describe events so vividly Wonderful Write

Posted 11 Years Ago


Amanda

11 Years Ago

Thanks for the double review :P
Jordan's Back

11 Years Ago

no problem
Very light and inspirational. One of your best pieces, I say. Good job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


I love your imagery in all your work. This is spellbinding! Wonderfully written!

Posted 11 Years Ago


I truly did. Thanks for sharing. I sent you a happy little poem I wrote a long time ago called Joyful. I hope you like it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Amanda

11 Years Ago

Ill check it out hHa
I love it, Hope you write more like this

Posted 11 Years Ago


I really like this poem! It has a really great message, thanks for sharing :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good message!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Not bad. Your meter gets me at times, but other than that you're establishing the imagery very well.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem has a beautiful message. I especially love that last stanza! This whole poem fills me from head to toe with warmth! Lovely writing!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I did enjoy reading it. It's beautiful.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 21, 2012
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