Unwanted

Unwanted

A Poem by Kelsey

Like captured grass that wilts and fades, the colors being drained.
Like leafless trees, their branches dead and broken.
Like falling snow that doesn't stick, it melts away and is forgotten.

I am the changing weather, the sadness that you find.
I am the grass that loses its life.
I am a tree that's stripped of its leaves.
I am the snow with no place to go, the weather not allowing me to stay.

Like falling rain on a sunny day, a rain that doesn't cease.
Like a stirring storm, loud crashes and bright streaks.

I am the rain that doesn't leave.
I am the storm over the sea, sailors begging me to ease.

I am everything you don't want to see,
I am the storm,
The storm is me.

© 2012 Kelsey


Author's Note

Kelsey
I don't usually write poetry like this, so I'd really appreciate your thoughts and suggestions. Thank you.

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I often times feel like this, Abashed, Abused, alone.. I have two spectrum's to myself, The hopeless romantic, and the Psychotic freak. This poem is written very well, Its expressionism is well beyond depth, it pierces the very core of the heart. This is definitely a favorite of mine, and I look forward to reading more from you!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kelsey

8 Years Ago

Thank you, dear, I really appreciate it. x
Jordan's Back

8 Years Ago

no problem. It was genuinely my pleasure!



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I really enjoyed this, I loved the line 'I am the rain that doesn't leave.' really interesting and I look forward to reading more of your work

Posted 5 Years Ago


Like falling rain on a sunny day, a rain that doesn't cease.
Like a stirring storm, loud crashes and bright streaks.

I love that line. A very solid poem

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kelsey

8 Years Ago

Than you so much. x
The storm captivated me.
Want such lovely storm again and again.
100/100

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kelsey

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much, I really appreciate it.
zainul

8 Years Ago

This is my pleasure.
Thank you very much.
Like falling snow that doesn't stick, it melts away and is forgotten.

What lovely melancholy words you share.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kelsey

8 Years Ago

Thank you, dear. x
I often times feel like this, Abashed, Abused, alone.. I have two spectrum's to myself, The hopeless romantic, and the Psychotic freak. This poem is written very well, Its expressionism is well beyond depth, it pierces the very core of the heart. This is definitely a favorite of mine, and I look forward to reading more from you!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kelsey

8 Years Ago

Thank you, dear, I really appreciate it. x
Jordan's Back

8 Years Ago

no problem. It was genuinely my pleasure!
"I am everything you don't want to see"
Great ending; it really tied the whole thing together. Like that rug from the Big Lebowski. I think this deserves a nice 100 because you stepped out of your comfort zone and nailed it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kelsey

8 Years Ago

Wow, thank you so much. Really, it means a lot. (:
i really like ur comparisons ..nice one
pls dont judge me by the rating
becoz i like this poem,truly

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kelsey

8 Years Ago

I can't see what you rated it, but either way I appreciate it greatly. Thank you!
Sahil - Shore

8 Years Ago

umm....sixty percent i would say....but yes, i like it
Wow , this is magnificent ! You should write more poetry like this .

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kelsey

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
wow lovely

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kelsey

8 Years Ago

Thank you. x
 Soul Fire

8 Years Ago

You're welcome
I cannot believe you are only sixteen with how brilliant this write is....Everything is so well and beautifully descripted...The changing of the grass, the wilting of the branches, everything so descriptive and stunning...I just cannot believe that you are only sixteen, I can only imagine if you keep your writing skills growing...By the time your in your twenties your going to be another Poe, Whittman, Thomas, or maybe even greater!!! Keep up the great writing Kelsey and don't stop growing your skills...

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kelsey

8 Years Ago

That's quite possibly the sweetest thing anyone's ever said about my writing. Thank you so much, I'l.. read more

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