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A Poem by Kelsey

A smile that shines,

brighter than any star.

Eyes I get lost in,

so luring and full of love.

Soft lips that speak,

the sweetest of sounds.


I look at you,

and all I see,

is everything I want.

Oh, man of my dreams,

dear love of my life,

won't you stay with me?


It is only you,

that I want to prove,

myself to.

Every day,

for the rest of our lives,

I devote myself to you.


I love you more,

every second of each day,

for what we have is a love,

that shall never fade.

You are the one,

the love of my life.


So please take my hand,

don't ever let go,

and I promise you,

we'll walk through,

every treacherous storm,

with our love as an umbrella.

© 2015 Kelsey


Author's Note

Kelsey
I wrote this poem for my boyfriend a short while ago. I haven't posted (or written, for that matter) in quite some time, so I figured I'd share and get some opinions. I hope everyone is doing well and I look forward to catching up on some reading. x

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Sounds like one of those great relationships. I especially liked the last line, about using love as your umbrella. You've definitely grown as a writer since the last time I saw your stuff, and it shows really clearly in this piece. Hope to see more of your stuff.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Kelsey

6 Years Ago

Thank you very much, I really appreciate that. I haven't been doing much writing lately but I hope b.. read more



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i really love the last two lines of the poem- the poem had a simplicity to it, but also a great flow, you could tell it came from the heart

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Kelsey

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much, dear. :)
beautiful write and wonderful metaphors in the last stanza! well done :)

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Kelsey

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
Indra Neil

6 Years Ago

u r most welcome! :)
Sounds like one of those great relationships. I especially liked the last line, about using love as your umbrella. You've definitely grown as a writer since the last time I saw your stuff, and it shows really clearly in this piece. Hope to see more of your stuff.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kelsey

6 Years Ago

Thank you very much, I really appreciate that. I haven't been doing much writing lately but I hope b.. read more

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