Once Upon A Time

What happened to our fairytale? Our happily ever after?

I knew you once upon a time,

I swear I knew every secret, truth, and lie. 

But somewhere along the line,

Our love had crashed and was left to die.

I don't know when our fairytale life,

Became more of a dream gone sour.

We seemed to live without much strife,

Maybe it seeped away, hour by hour.

Everything has changed us now.

Our early days once filled with laughter,

Never questioning why or how.

What happened to our happily ever after?

Our story line has changed and twisted,

Our hearts now beat a different chime.

Though you pretend we never existed,

I knew you once upon a time. 

Author's Note

Thoughts?

Reviews

[taboo.poet]

"Wow I loved this. It was beautiful. I loved the last stanza:
Our story line has changed and twisted,
Our hearts now beat a different chime.
Though you pretend we never existed,
I knew you once upon a time. "
It's very relatable (is "relatable" a word? lol) with any negative situation of loss. It's beautifully written, and keep it up :)

[SuicidePact.]

AMAZING I really adore this

[P.S.Chance]

so sad. people we love shouldn't be able to just leave us behind like a passing thought.

[Soul Fire]

wow amazing

[Rhea752]

I LOVE THAT SHOW!!! this is a great poem beautifully written. Keep it Up!! :)

[Rose of Gondor]

So I'm not the only one who thought "OMG I LOVE THIS SHOW" when I saw this? :D

[Rhea752]

LOL :D

[Amanda]

Well then you two can pretend that this is about...maybe mr. Gold and belle? Or when mary margaret was ignoring david? :P

[Rose of Gondor]

That's perfect! :)

[_]

I'm going to run out of good comeback compliments for reviews on this website and I swear its because of you and other writers here! Damn you good writers!!!!! Oh well! Anyways, you have fantastic flow and rhyme and that made me squeal like a four year old cause it was so smooth lol.

[Amanda]

Lol thanks haha :)

[Sarah G.]

This is a very nice poem and I love what you conveyed through it. It also reminds me of someone so I could really relate to this.
Great job! :)

[Amanda]

Thanks

[de_maruf]

nice amanda

[Amanda]

Thanks

[Starlit Dhrub]

good good good poem!!!!!!!!

[Amanda]

Thanks :)

[Starlit Dhrub]

your welcome

[Damien Davison]

Wow, good poem, reminded me of my ex. Great wording and structure.

[Amanda]

Thanks :)