Once Upon A Time

What happened to our fairytale? Our happily ever after?

I knew you once upon a time,

I swear I knew every secret, truth, and lie. 

But somewhere along the line,

Our love had crashed and was left to die.

I don't know when our fairytale life,

Became more of a dream gone sour.

We seemed to live without much strife,

Maybe it seeped away, hour by hour.

Everything has changed us now.

Our early days once filled with laughter,

Never questioning why or how.

What happened to our happily ever after?

Our story line has changed and twisted,

Our hearts now beat a different chime.

Though you pretend we never existed,

I knew you once upon a time. 

Author's Note

Thoughts?

Reviews

[Alejandra]

Very nice. I like the topic. It's also very true.

[Steven Cash]

Nice :/

[Amanda]

you always read my stuff at the wrong times :P

[Steven Cash]

Yea I do

[Cerise]

Woow...amazing work..very well written..loved the overall flow

[Amanda]

Thanks :)

[Sophie]

I love this!
My only thing is the 2nd stanza, and its just a sugfgesttion
"I don't know when our fairytale life
became more of a dream and went sour,
maybe it seeped away
are was suddenly gone at the midnight hour"
I'm just thinking of midnight becasue Cinderella and Shrek and yadda yadda

[Amanda]

Do you mean or? For the last line i mean

[Sophie]

yeah, as you can see by 'sugfgesttion' which i typed four times and then gave up on, i cant spell.

[Amanda]

I didnt even notice haha