rose, ohh!..it blows me off..

beautiful comparison between rose and girl..

Alluring and Enthralling beauty
reminds me of your glory!
redden as rouge
flush me, suffuse!
rose, ohh! it blows me off..

Delicate and dazzling petals
just like your skin, soften
people call it a symbol of 'love'
but for me, a symbol of 'you'
ohh this rose, drags me to you....!!

Rain drops on your face
just like dew drops in pace
on petals, going to stake
right through my heart, and attack
ohh this rose, really blows me off!!

Petals falling in breeze
just like your hair, ohh it made me freeze
exquisite and mesmeric
you are just ravishing
ohh this rose...

TO every rose, I smell
reminds me of your perfume, again and again
Its my pain, how can I explain
girl, am going through hell
because it's rose, which blows me off!!

Whenever I bring it you
my heart, smash into you
and when you react, ohh dear
I only wish..."could i have this kiss FOREVER"??

Reviews

[Just Kim]

Oh This is so wonderful, Love your rhyme scheme and flow.
Reads like a beautiful song!

[Surbhi Khandelwal]

Oh i am thrilled..thanks for the glorying review Tabby! :)

[AdorableDreams]

I like it.

[Surbhi Khandelwal]

Thank you cocktails :)!

[Akshat♥]

Awesome comparison between rose and girl:)
i think it blow me off..lol
Keep writing!!

[Surbhi Khandelwal]

ohh really ?
:P
Nyways, thanku so much, akshat :) !

[Akshat♥]

yes,you are welcome dear :)
if u want to blow urself off than check my poems ;)

[Surbhi Khandelwal]

haha...
definately..i will ;)

[NITHIN PURPLE]

A variety poem,the style u created is more creative..and liked

[Surbhi Khandelwal]

Thank you so much nithin :)!
glad to see you came by!

[NITHIN PURPLE]

llll'''welcome