Breaking Point

Breaking Point

A Poem by Raven Dodson
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Just a venting session of a day gone wrong

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The only thing I know is to push myself beyond anyone's wildest imagination 
I aim in the right direction, but what am I doing wrong 
Tumbling downward  until I am farther into a deep dark hole 
So far down there is no sign of light
It makes me withdrawn
I am not sure if I can get over the unknown
Using all my might 
Just reached my breaking point no idea if I can survive  
It seems like there is no hope in sight 
Maybe this is where I belong 
Making the climb back up 
It eats my soul 
Am I not good enough? 
Is this too corrupt? 
Why do I always manage to screw up? 
My breaking point, I am finally done 

© 2014 Raven Dodson


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This title really made me agree with you, that everyone has their breaking point. There's no telling when it will hit. And in life, we must be able to face the unknown, whether we like it or not. The unknown is all around us, even if we don't see it. We waste too much time questioning ourselves, when we can't change our personality or who we truly are on the inside. Sure, we can change the outside, but would that make us or break us? Make us better or worse?

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on March 29, 2014
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Tags: Venting, Life, Poetry, Feelings, Breaking Point

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Raven Dodson
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I am a very passionate person who loves to be around people making me extremely outgoing. I express my feelings through writing, art, and photography. I am here just to write and appreciate comments, .. more..

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