Lost In Travelling...

Edited version...

Every tree has a story
To tell me,
Every drop has a visual 
To show me,
Every bird have a song
To sing,
Every animal have some magic
That I wanna see,
Every road have some scars
Of struggle that I wanna cherish,
Every heart beat of mine says
You can,
Every second I breathe says
Am leaving a life,
Every day, every sunrise says
Waiting for you in a brand new place,
Every night I say tomorrow is
A new day for travelling,
Every pic I click shows my life..

Author's Note

Might be good than previous one....running out of words...hope to see your comments..

Reviews

[Giulia King]

This is like Wanderlust :)
"I love my pen it
Introduced me to me" That's so accurate!

[Surya]

Thank you for your kind visit..:)

[Bala Gorthi]

For one who loves traveling, everything you get there is lovable and enjoyable.
I enjoyed this line- I love my pen..it introduced me to me..
Writing makes us to meet ourselves.
Beautifully crafted. Keep it up, Surya.

[Surya]

Thank you Bala....:)

[Farhan Shaikh]

very well written, beautifully described the things you love and need, really good.

[Surya]

Thank you Farhan..:)

[Sonakshi Arora]

Travelling helps us see things from a different perspective. This is such a great poem!

[Surya]

Thank you sonakshi for your kind visit..:)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

The emotions here are very well expressed. Losing oneself in these things does seem like a good option for awhile.
I felt the flow was off in some places but apart from that I liked how you conveyed it. 😊

[Surya]

Yeah I agree, as I said no words with me when I was about to write this, if possible I will update it one day...:)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Oh I'm sure you will! You're a good writer 😊

[Surya]

Thanks a lot...:)

[Najam Us Saher]

I liked how you have used different words for expressing and relating yourself with them.

[Surya]

Haha, ok..at first I was confused with your name so I prefer dear...not an intention and i understand how annoyed you are....sorry....and thank you will be fine I guess...Thank you..

[Najam Us Saher]

Its okay....

[Manasa.L]

May be not your best but not the worst either. You have certainly captured your ideas in this. Not criticising but you can improve on the way of putting words together, in a rightful manner or can pay a little attention on the positions of it.
Good work, keep writing.

[Surya]

Yeah it's not my best...I dont feel to write this but somehow I wrote...my next work might be good than this..

[Manasa.L]

Will be waiting for it.