Dad...

We had a car that traveled world

You had a heart of galored strength

Won my heart but left me alone

Memoir of dad engraved my heart

No much strength to fight

this fiery world all alone

Miss your strength but

now am alone

Loved you day and night

Bagged you in my heart all my life

Then why did you left me alone

I have no courage to stay alone

Miss you dad with all my heart

Love you dad with all I had

I will make you smile one day

Just to see my dad dancing alone....

Reviews

[Zephyr]

I too love my dad very much.
But I have never expressed it through a poem!
The lines you painted are really warm and filled with love.
But in the third stanza, it should have been 'leave' instead of 'left'.
Thanks a lot for sharing this Surya:)

[Surya]

It's exactly what I said Neetha, he left from this world.....Thank you...:)

[Zephyr]

Pleasure always:)

[Priyanshi]

Memories of dad..very well portrayed it.
Thank you for sharing such a beauitful work, friend.

[Surya]

Thank you soo much Priyanshi...am glad you loved it...:)

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure, Friend.

[wordman]

we don`t really know what we have until it`s gone
i remember my dad very well

[Surya]

True it is...:)

[Coyote Poetry]

A wonderful poem for your father. The kind memories become gold. The lucky writer write down their memories. So we can never forget. Thank you Surya for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Surya]

Thank you much John....:)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear friend.

[Abraham George]

Miss you dad with all my heart
Love you dad with all I had
I will make you smile one day
Just to see my dad dancing alone....

also you made him proud my friend not only smile

well written

[Surya]

Thank you so much....Am glad for your words...:)

[Najam Us Saher]

I can feel your emotions. I really have no words enough to say how heart warming this poem is. Well done.

[Surya]

Thank you so much...It means to me...:)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're most welcome. ☺

[Wajiha Nayeem]

awww.......uncle is really lucky to have a son lyk you surya!.....

[Surya]

Thank you so much Dear, you added some tears....Thank you ...:)

[Mr.Writer]

Such an emotional, powerful and beautiful poem Surya!
The last line struck me hard, and I felt the sorrow and pain...
Our dads indeed are really important...
Well done, keep it up!1

[Surya]

They are priceless...Thank you Shaan...:)

[pragya gaur]

awEsome.... But this is best of all...One cannot imagine a life without dad... Emotional

[Surya]

Yep, one cannot...Thank you so much Pragya...:)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Heart touching poem, this was really wonderful..I'm sure he will be proud of you😊

[Surya]

Thank you so much Farhan...It means to me...:)