Mermaid On Moon

Mermaid On Moon

A Poem by Surya
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Just a Paint

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Chasing the gazing moon
Hidden in infinite trees
On my wheels, I bid an
Adieu to the hopping deer

Seen a phantom shedding 
Blood from Blue eyes,
Had a reckless ride till
My nerves cried.
Stopped at a lustrous vision
Where a lump of emeralds
Floating on dark black waters
Guarded by mermaids
With  radiant pink eyes.

Moon I found next to my  vision
Pleased mermaids with an ode
Of romance, granted am to pass on.
A van of swan driven by a half man 
To those stars I waved a bye.
Landed on moon, sat on my throne
Half man at service and mermaid 
In my lap.

Opened my eyes and 
Giggled at my sense
After painting a dream I seen...

© 2017 Surya


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beautiful dream you painted with words instead of brush.

Loved it

Posted 2 Years Ago


Surya

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much friend...:)
Quite a journey my friend.
"Landed on moon, sat on my throne
Half man at service and mermaid
In my lap. "
I do like the above lines. Good to be on the moon with a mermaid. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


Surya

2 Years Ago

Yeah it feels good till it bites, haha...Thank you John...:)
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

I enjoyed this one my friend and you are welcome.
I think dreams are where we can freely exceed our limits ;) This is a wonderfully painted dream! I loved the imagery you created, Surya. Well penned.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Surya

2 Years Ago

Thank you Yumna :)
Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

You're welcome 😊
wow ! the last line made me feel bad though haha! cause it looked so beautiful indeed . like a parallel universe. truly a great work not just in feel but amazing words used for poetry. Keep it up. Well done


Posted 2 Years Ago


Surya

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your kind visit and words friend...:)
heartspeaks

2 Years Ago

my pleasure
oh what hues of life we can paint in our dreams...and then that HD reality when we waken...and wish sleep was real life and we could nod off to real life.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Surya

2 Years Ago

Haha, positive....it feels good...Thank you J.
Ah...crazzy imagery and the picture was in my mind showing up...pretty wonderful....and the poetry was AMAZINGG!!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Surya

2 Years Ago

Haha,Thank you dear...:)
' Moon I found next to my vision ~ Pleased mermaids with an ode ~ Of romance .. '

What a dream you've painted for your readers... a fantasy of sorts and gentle but clearly displayed.
Many thank yous for sharing such colours.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Surya

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much Emma..:)
Your words made me to imagine what mentioned in this poetry and believe me i have a strong imagination.. so what i mean to say is this is outstanding..

Posted 2 Years Ago


Surya

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much Farhan....:)
Wow. Utterly beautiful imagination. I truly liked this. You painted an image with your words. Thank you so much for sharing.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Surya

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your kind words...:)
Najam Us Saher

2 Years Ago

No need to thank me. ☺
Hey, wonderful dream, portrayed in beautiful words.
Very well written, dear.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Surya

2 Years Ago

Haha, Its just a fiction I conveyed in a form of story not any dream, Thank you so much Priyanshi..... read more
Priyanshi

2 Years Ago

Okay, My pleasure.

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