Trapped by Reason

Trapped by Reason

A Poem by Susie

Sometimes I wish I were an animal. Eating, playing, sleeping, multiplying, fighting, hunting. Indulging without the experience being spoiled by wondering whether they are worthy.

© 2014 Susie


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I had those thoughts long time ago. I read where animals have a lot in common with humans like jealousy, crying and wailing the dead, marriage in the sense of loyalty...And so forth. A lot of scientists are studying that as we speak...Bravo....................

Posted 9 Years Ago


same mate, though we are blessed to be human, in a way. Deep thought. Check out my stuff when you have the time! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Susie

9 Years Ago

Will do, hun. x
Whether they are worthy?? That question haunts each one of us.. This are few lines which portray your dilemma that why are gifted with that conscience when no human uses it. An introspective write.. ★takecare★

~Sophy

Posted 9 Years Ago


Haha I now how you feel. An absolute truth to one self and humanism to long for something we cant have and to be an animal wow :) Thanks for sharing your thoughts :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Susie

9 Years Ago

You too! Thanks for reading - and thinking about the meaning. :)
I've always felt that its better to be an animal because even though they must fend for themselves, find their own food, they seem way more easygoing and comforting about life and things around them. It would also depend on what animal you'd decide to be and how many predators you would like to have after you. Another plus is that they would live outdoors, in the wild. I've always loved the feel and atmosphere of the open air.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Yes indeed Susie, I often think likewise!

A short but quite absorbing and interesting piece of poetic philosophy, kudos indeed !

Posted 9 Years Ago


Susie

9 Years Ago

Really. That's good! Sometimes my thoughts seem too abstract to be shared but it's amazing what peo.. read more
Nice one, yes animals are sometimes more worthy than humans!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Susie

9 Years Ago

They are definitely more honest, that's for sure. Thanks for the friend request!! :D
Writer at last! Sky ~

9 Years Ago

You're welcome!
I have the same feelings, apart from being human:)

I always enjoy your deep thought!

Posted 9 Years Ago



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