BIG TOE

written on a bet that I couldn't write a poem about a big toe

BIG TOE

 

What is this fascination

I have with your big toe

I hope that you discover

What I already know

 

It’s not the toe at all I crave

It’s the woman that’s attached

The one who’s smart and caring

To me we are well matched

 

Why should that toe excite me

For I am fully grown

I do not make it happen

It happens on its own

 

I’d love to taste that big toe

I’m sure it’s sweet and warm

For that toe is just a proxy

For your wit and endless charm

 

If you are not offended

I’d like to have some more

For toes like yours are rare indeed

And something I do adore

 

One more thing I need to say

It’s not about toes you see

Your inner and outer beauty

Puts this smile on me

Reviews

[Tricia Pattinson]

Lovely toe poem. You make your point with style.

[Roger Turgeon]

I like that comment "lovely toe poem" haha ..... have you read many?

[Adrimira]

From one toe poet to another, I really enjoyed this poem! It's bold, it's kinky, and it also talks about the admiration for this woman... very well balanced and very well written. Thank you for sharing Roger.

btw I read the heading on top and I'd like to know how the betting bit got started, sounds interesting! lol

[Roger Turgeon]

I am glad you took the time to find this poem among my postings. Thanks for the review. I wrote a few poems for a woman (not to a woman) and she always picked the topic. She then said "Bet you can't write about a big toe"....so I did LOL

[Adrimira]

Lol, very clever. You are very talented (as if you needed another person to point that out to you lol but you are!). I don't know many people who would or could write a poem about a toe, perhaps because it doesn't sound very appealing... unless if one knows how to! lol ;-)

[Roger Turgeon]

Truth be told... I prefer your toe.... poem that is ( : O )

[Adrimira]

LOL. Thank you. This is going to sound very corny; let's just agree, we like each other's toes! hahahaha! ;-)

[Enigmatic Amor]

Lovely, lovely poem! You are very adept with the language. You also have a lovely wit. I loved the idea of the toe standing in for the entirety of her. Beautifully written.

[Roger Turgeon]

Why thank you......blushes.

[Frieda P]

Ha witty, you've accomplished your goal, now about that foot fetish....thanks for the smile!

[Roger Turgeon]

Foot fetish? Who me? Dang I've been found out. ( : O )

[Frieda P]

Hey, nothing wrong with kinky, especially when written so cleverly ;-)