You Are Welcome.

In convenience
I have found my fond place
and in it,
that muggy moment
I am perfect
like the seamless skin of a doll.
I serve my purpose
with elegant head bowed
to elegant head hidden
or open hand pumping against bruised blue heart,
hopefully healing.
I have found my place
among the pale flowers along the wall
when that is where you want me.
I have found my place
black belted in leather
with whips as fingertips
because that is where you want me, perverted
I have found my place
in solitude...
if that is where you leave me.
You are welcome.
 

Reviews

[BjH]

"Your words carry us to the deepest places of the soul"
Cheers Craig Fro(G)man
Cheers for the words!
Well, he said it all. Didn't he.
In short it is hard to say something origional when so many have already read and reviewed. And sometimes I don't have the book smarts of old Craig down there so I shall copy what he said. Yes.
P.S.
Great Title.

[An owl on the moon]

Your words carry us to the deepest places of the soul. Here we find a message that conveys a desire to be desired... to be wanted... to melt away into something else other than yourself... for another... Painful, beautiful, and bittersweet... You are a remarkable writer.

[David Ellert]

I dig this. I'm not generally into poetry, but I thought I should give it a shot. I'm glad I did. I found this work to be descriptive and well structured. Nifty piece!

[Jibey]

This has a sad beauty about it and comes across powerfully as a depiction of one who is resigned to her role as a submissive... bruised and pale indeed

[PianoandPage]

yeah, definately love the submissive as domme vibe here. how as submissives are the true power holders in the relationship. you write well enough to convey that subltety and with wit and gentle imagery. yet you keep it edgy and interesting.

the last line has amazing double meaning.

[The Flawed]

The one thing that excites me about your work, the reason I look forward to your new posts is ORIGINALITY, you look at things and describe them in your own unique way and bring it to life,
To me this piece is about submission,
But what do I know?
Love your work,
Well done

[Cool Handless Luke]

I know exactly the feelings you are conveying here and you have presented them well. A very good job of coloring your thoughts without leaving them dripping in sarcasm.

[Kenny L. Mitchell]

Sometimes I feel "dirty" readng your stuff! KIDDING! I swear I'm just KIDDING! LOL! Really lady, I'm very fond of your work. You have a unique gift. Please keep honing and exercising your craft! GOOD WORK!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I don't know what to say sometimes after reading your work... when someone want to make you the person they want instead of accepting who you are then it is more bout control then love...
All i know is this again is such an original way of expressing those feelings of contempt in a love/hate relationship.

have found my place
black belted in leather
with whips as fingertips

WOW those lines just blew my mind.