Lust

I'm burning for you caught in your fire
Captivated by the scent of desire
The Desire for all the sweetest sins
Touch of your lips the taste of your skin
I put my hands around your hips
As I move tongue, you bite your lips
I kiss my way back up to your face
Savoring every spot I taste
I love the look I see in your eyes
When you feel me in between your thighs
You feel me thrust, you gasp for air
and scream in ecstasy as I pull your hair
Feeling you feel me deep inside
Baby this is gonna be a hell of a ride....

Reviews

[Demii]

I like the theme and the flow of the piece, and how it rhymes. I think towards the end you could of made it a little more romantic, make someone jump to the edge of their seat!