Cubicle

Cubicle

A Poem by Sweedy Pie

Trapped in a cubicle of confusion
Tired of living up-to everyone's expectations
Unable to vent out my frustration
I sit here; lamenting my limitations

I stare at the blank space
Hurt in many different ways
Tears sprinkle down my face
I sit here ; counting my remaining days

Days that will relieve me
From this profound insanity
Delusions have deceived me
I sit here; seeking peace from reality

© 2017 Sweedy Pie


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I'm sure there are many in your position that would love to head for the nearest plane to somewhere quiet and not so hectic.

The pressure of an office job can spin your head in different directions at once.

You've expressed your frustrations well here.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sweedy Pie

7 Years Ago

Thank you for understanding the hidden frustration behind this simple poem. Means a lot !!!!!



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I'm sure there are many in your position that would love to head for the nearest plane to somewhere quiet and not so hectic.

The pressure of an office job can spin your head in different directions at once.

You've expressed your frustrations well here.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sweedy Pie

7 Years Ago

Thank you for understanding the hidden frustration behind this simple poem. Means a lot !!!!!
I love it. It's full of emotions, the reader can relate and feel "you" in it. Nice work!


Posted 7 Years Ago


Sweedy Pie

7 Years Ago

aww thank you so much glorea!!! means a lot
Great work. I think we've all had those feelings. Very relatable. You may want to try using a caesura instead of the semi colon endings each stanza. Just a suggestion though. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sweedy Pie

7 Years Ago

Yes that is a good suggestion tim. thank you!

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Added on March 29, 2017
Last Updated on March 29, 2017
Tags: Pain, Work Stress

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