Beutiful Death

I cannot spell Beutiful!!!

Death,

The most beautiful thing on earth.

Earth,

The most beautiful thing in life.

Life,

The  most beautiful thing in death.

Author's Note

What do you think?

Reviews

[Jack...]

Very cool, I like how it wonj't end unless you want it to.

[screamin'ian]

I'm a big fan of minimalism, so this is very appealing to me. I like the circular pattern, the rhythm, and the thoughts behind it. Very good!

[Sarah]

short but very efective

[Ray]

It is very true that death is part of death and I had not thought of the other way round ! It is a very impressive poem that really does invite some thinking about the meaning of life !! You did a really good job !

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Well I can say it is beautiful - and poetic and true!

[Prithvi D]

In the movie Troy..
Achilles says something like this "I have seen people die and i have killed them..and there is nothing beautiful about death, nothing poetic"
But i still think the beauty lies in how one has lived his life.. and that can be discovered only when one dies..