Disappeared Without A Trace

Smiling faces surround me,

Laughter echoes the air,

It's almost as though I'm invisible,

Disappeared without a trace.

 

They barely even look at me,

It's as though I don't exist,

It's almost as if I'm invisible,

Disappeared without a trace.

 

Everything is my fault,

They boss me here and there,

It's almost as though I'm invisible,

Disappeared without a trace.

Author's Note

I made this poem up during a P.E. lesson because I was being left out and I was bored to death.

Reviews

[Jack...]

This reminds me of me on many days. We can stand in a crowd and feel as though no one sees us or cares to pay attention. Very nice my friend.

[Samuel Jack]

reminds me of school, you've definatly got something good with this poem, but i think you could expand on it and give a few more details or observations of your surroundings. I know im nit picking but i think you missed spelled Barely, even though "they barley even look at me" conjured up some fun images :)
keep up the good work.

[Alys Jackson]

OMG thank you! Yeah... I'll fix the barley!

[Stella]

Great poem! It's easy to relate to your poem because we have all felt invisible.

[Sarah]

It is amazing, and very true to some people. it is very nice, i loved it.

[Peachgirl]

Wow!!