Kissed By A Fool

Painting by Pino Daeni

 

She was kissed by a fool
 ~contagious love~
 melting upon her lips
 dripping sweet passion
 ~forbidden~
 sinking into her being
 etched upon her heart
 breathless feelings
 ~wandering~
 upon wistful dreams
 and salty teardrops
 ~splashed~
 upon a wilderness
 of dormant buds
 scented with promises
 of what could have been
 and foolish thoughts
 of If and maybe

 

©SyberRose

Author's Note

thank you for taking time to read.

Reviews

[Cassie]

Very nicely penned. quite a good read, I Loved the choice of words.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Cassie...I appreciate your comments today...Rose:)

[s y e]

Ha, I loved the title of this, made me smile so thank you for that. :)

Secondly, your poem is amazing. You have such an amazing way of telling a story, you write so beautifully and with so much passion and honesty. Well done.... Hugss

[SyberRose]

Well Im glad you enjoyed Sye...thanks so much and for peeking in...hugss

[s y e]

Anytime, my pleasure, hun! :) hugs

[Stella Armour]

there are always "ifs and maybes", but i we don't take that chance when it comes along we may be the fools..

[SyberRose]

Thanks Stella...nice to be back...hugsss

[jacob erin-cilberto]

well if we don't take a chance on those "ifs" and "maybes"---

we'll never know...whether we are fools or not...

love is always a risk...and some see it as a foolish one, i don't!

[SyberRose]

thanks Jacob...he was a fool for leaving her..thats what it is intended to mean...not for being in love...breaking promises another words...Ill be away today and tomorrow...see ya when I return.
Rose

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yet double meanings are good too...i am always glad when readers can gather something from what i write...it is a good poem.

jacob

[Rita L. Sev]

"If and Maybe..." foolish thoughts, perhaps, but not for those in love... Great imagery in this romantic piece, Rose.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Rita...I appreciate you nice comments tonight and have a good weekend...Rose

[Sami Khalil]

"upon a wilderness
of dormant buds
scented with promises
of what could have been
and foolish thoughts"
The site was down for some reason so in a way I'm glad it is back to catch up on some great poetry...:)

[SyberRose]

Yes I know...I guess they were working on it doing maintenance or something...Don't you just hate that haa...thank you Sami...i'll be away for a couple days but will return...Have a nice weekend.
Rose

[Sami Khalil]

I do agree...You too...Have a great one...:)