Dreamweaver

Painting by Josephine Wall

Interlaced threads of luster and silken seams

Weave a fantasy of gold taffeta dreams

Cross stitch kisses, promises and love notes

Embroidered whispers upon a sea afloat

Knit one purl two, a blanket under the stars

Needlepoint goblets of red wine afar

A gold cable stitch on left hand ring finger

A chain stitch linking our lives together

Before the bobbin soon comes to an end

Hurry...spin him into this dreamweaver's blend

As this interweaving dream stitches to a close

Finishing with satin stitches and a red rose

©SyberRose

Author's Note

Thank you reading.

Reviews

[Patrick Henry]

"Raindrops on roses and whiskers on kittens".... I Love this. The font is tiny,but after copy/pasting it to a text document to make it larger, it was seen to be a most wonderful poem to read!! It also reminded me of a song I know. The language is gorgeous with the perfect timing and this silky swell of beats going up and down and ending the lines on these perfect little notes. This was fun to read, Rose.... The only thing that kinda messed with the "rhythm" within these pretty words, was where the lines read like this to me: This is how it is, This is how it is, This is how etc..... Wonderful job and to throw "purl" in there was awesome. To even make the connection in lines between such a rare word and the sea was very nice. xoxo -Mark

[SyberRose]

Thank you I enjoy hearing your comments...I usually use the #12 font...on the postings...I guess everyones eyes are different though...thanks for peeking in Mark...Rose:)

[AdorableDreams]

Good one, I like the expensive words you use in this one. Really good, keep writing!

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much for peeking in:)

[AdorableDreams]

haha your welcome.

[Shaun Payton]

I thinks you poet are wonderful..A painting with words depicting love, hope and faith. *applause* :)

[SyberRose]

Thank you Shaun and for those nice comments...Rose:)

[Shaun Payton]

You are welcome Rose:)

[Magnolia]

An amazing poem Rose...a pure fantasy...love it !

[SyberRose]

Thank you Maggie...I'm happy you enjoyed it...:)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

You have weaved a tapestry of bliss, love and faith. Your work is so uplifting.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Dale...always nice having you stop by and visit...Rose:)

[quinfinn]

you churn out awesome poetry like Noodlehead used to do....always awesome and always very readable. guess you're on a roll!

[SyberRose]

Im taking a break at the moment and just reading Quin...but it is nice hearing from you today:)Rose

[quinfinn]

you too, Rose

[Sarah Khalil]

Rose, I think this might be my favorite piece from you yet :) It's delicate and crafted with incredible love and care.

[SyberRose]

Oh thank you so much Sarah...i'm so glad you enjoyed it...Rose:)

[Ency Bearis]

Well crafted verses and nicely woven words.

[SyberRose]

thank you Ency...and hope you are having a nice day.:)

[Rahul]

Nicely penned "Rose", liked this piece, words're powerful and i loved your font too...as well :)

[SyberRose]

thank you so much Rahul...and for peeking in:)

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Your words are timeless, Ms. Rose. Always a delight!

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Brandon...It was a fun write...nice to hear from you...Rose