Dusk to Dawn

The white satin tides fall softly

upon the shoulder of the shore

as dusk removes the sarong

of a pink particle sunset

 

While the candelabra of the stars

            sing a harmonious song of luster

 the nuances of the wind shadow dance

            across the mind of a stranger

 

The wingspan of an incarnadine moon

drifts to the other side

and the aubade of the dawn

            awaits for destiny to arrive

 

As the esoteric secret of lovers

vanish with the ebb of the tides

back into the undulating waves

            of the tumultuous sea.

 

©SyberRose

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

thank you for reading.

Reviews

[Aethereal]

This poem is beautiful from top to bottom. I can feel that esoteric secret blending into the natural seascape. Your first verse inspire me to write a gift quatrain for you which you may keep as your own since I used some of your ideas and words to construct it. It’s in /0/0/0/ seven syllable meter so as to make it sing:

Dusk

Satin tides spread pearly foam
on the shoulder of the shore
as dusk pours out monochrome
o’er the sunset’s pink decor.

[SyberRose]

thank you so much and so nice of you to say...and I loved your version ..thank you so much for peeking in ...Rose:)

[Aethereal]

You're welcome!

[redflutterby]

Oh the splendid imagery here!! Love it Rose!!

[SyberRose]

thank you Red and nice to hear from you tonight...glad you enjoyed...Rose:)

[Rita L. Sev]

The wingspan of an incarnadine moon
drifts to the other side...

Love your word choices in this one, Rose - you have painted another gorgeous scene with your pen!

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Rita for peeking in tonight...glad you enjoyed...Rose

[Einstein Noodle]

mmmmdusk to dawn ... lovely... beautifully said... did you mean to say "minds of strangers" or " mind of a stranger"; and in the last verse; " secrets vanish" or "secret vanishes" .. the pic is exquisite and i adore the language.. especially aubade... bravo!
E.
"To ope their golden eyes:
With everything that pretty bin,
My lady sweet, arise!
Arise, arise!"
WS

[SyberRose]

thank you E and thank you for bringing my attention to that ...I changed it...yes i loved the photo...beautiful colors....thanks for peeking in...and for the poem too...Rose:)

[Sami Khalil]

Your writes other than being marvelous they are soothing and serene as if you are at peace watching all of that unfolding naturally before our eyes...Bravo

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Sami and for peeking in tonight...glad you enjoyed this piece...:)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...Any time...:)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

My first read sine returning home... talk about bringing serenity to a crazed mind.
Always enjoy stopping by.

[SyberRose]

thank you Dale and welcome home...poetry does have a way of calming the mind...glad you liked
this piece...thanks for peeking in...Rose:)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

LOve peeking, thanks for haring.