What I Wouldn't Do

About a boy. Inspired by a song my best friend wrote about her boyfriend. February 2009.

What I wouldn't do
to run my hands
through those beautiful curls.
What I wouldn't do
to feel his slender hand
grip mine.
What I wouldn't do
to look into those big brown eyes
and see them looking at me, too.

Author's Note

Note that I am working on expanding this, I'm just not sure where to go with it right now.

Reviews

[Plexiglass]

Hey I liked this a lot and I thought it was simple, and honest and that's why I think it was successful. You could expand it if you like but I think it can also stand as it is now. I like the use of repetition and the wording. Good work.