Rose

Capture her spine, bone white

laying effortlessly back, feigning

her helplessness

in mind of your desire.

 

Mirrorring glances, to approach

slowly,

arms underneath her silken camber

skin 

rise, latissimus smoothed

below his touch.

 

A subtle,

echoed drop.

 

An empty room

highly sought.

Sculptured divinely,

definitively.  

They are surrounded, 

unprevented by the century.

 

 

Reviews

[Kes]

I love this. You caught my imagination from the first line!
It's fantastic. I can't put my finger on why, but I love it. :)
Keep writing!
x

[~Princess~]

A subtle echoed drop. Wow you're geniuse this made me catch my breath as well. It stands out so brillant great jod my friend you did perfect.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

A subtle echoed drop.........this line alone made me catch my breath. Lovely!

[...]

"A subtle,
echoed drop.

An empty room
highly sought.
Sculptured divinely,
definitively. "

. your genius echoes ... definitively ...

[Lily Mae]

"A subtle, echoed drop
an empty room"....excellent write..xx

[Nobody.]

"A subtle,

echoed drop."

Brilliant.

Love the whole piece. Very sensual, but, not so much in an erotic way. Seems deeper. Feels dreamier. Damn good poetry dude.

Cheers!