March And March

The soldiers of war that glorified our land

March and March
To the land of liquidation
Joining arms with each other
As we glorify our land
All the rounds of bullets
The boons to cause destruction
The dancing dagger in the edge
Ready to slash the weak flesh
Warriors leaves their dwelling
Remembering them all in snivel
Shadows and kins all in tears
As they embrace the cist
And wearing it like a necklace

Casting them into the fray
Scrimmage of the flying bullets
Raring the muscles to slicing life
Tussling for a triumph beyond victory
Quarrelling over time after time
Only blood cries as bodies detach
All in the name of our land
They will all hurt them with their lives
Scrambled flesh and tossed bones
Written down in piece of paper
To reflect ourselves in history
A paradox in your vivid imagination
Situating in the sulking breeze

Hope not that the regret will linger
The remaining few comes back
Either a flag over casket
Or the disrupted minds in war
A promise that never kept for some
A bitter taste in their curriculum
Remind them not of what they have done
They once had a heart that faded to black
Running helter-skelter with memories
Comrades became a shadow
No longer he can call the lost souls
Antagonism never ever ends
As warriors will be called again

Author's Note

Hope you enjoy your read and please leave a generous review on my page

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Excellent. ....:).........

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you soo much Sami

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome. My pleasure. ....:)......

[Ana B.]

I like the intent behind this one...a very unexpected ending :)

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you soo much Ana for your kind review towards my poem

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Powerful and intese. The message resonates...:).....

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you soo much Mr Sami for your kind review

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)......

[AaronFreitas]

Good work Terrence... enjoyable read.

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you soo much Aaron

[wordman]

a great lesson of history and today`s time

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you soo much Wordman

[Confuser]

Chang: What a fabulous poem. I am so impressed with the flow, the usage of language the theme. Soldiers will continue to March And March (great title) and the history is there; I will never try to understand the why's just try to show compassion, and look at the love ones, the promises kept and so many sadly not which your imagery has vividly reflected: It is an amazing poem: the families watching as their love ones leave; and if they return, how will they be affected. The torture of war; the insanity of it all - this is a wonderful tribute to any soldier with raw strong decriptions: And also your your history, your legacy; to write this "March" in your mind/capture and retrieve lines such as:
Only blood cries as bodies detach
All in the name of our land
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Remind them not of what they have done
They one had a heart that faded to black
Running helter-skelter with memories
Comrades became a shadow
No longer he can call the lost souls
Antagonism never ever ends
As warriors will be called again
Chang: Loved it. Thank you so much. Dale

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you soo much Dale for giving me such a lovely review and let me strive to write better and better

[Confuser]

You're welcome, but Chang, you're doing to well! (wrote a poem using your words "Red Moon"-didn't think you'd care...need to revisit it...Just loved the words).

[Terrence Chang]

Sure I will

[Confuser]

You mean, I shouldn't use the words?

[Terrence Chang]

No that not what I ment if it fits in for your poem then use it. I have no objection.

[Confuser]

We'll see....thanks. Hope you're doing well....

[Jamestown]

Well written and expressed!
Great topic to touch on and a solid message,
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you soo much James for your generous review

[Lizardo]

I really enjoyed this poem! The flow and everything, keep on marching!
The endind line is just epic.
This is a really good poem Terrence!
Awesome work

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you soo much Lizardo for your uplifting review

[Lizardo]

You're welcome Terrence, it is really good