Veni, Vidi, Vici

Veni, Vidi, Vici

A Poem by Aurora Dawn

Veni, Vidi, Vici.
I came, I saw, I conquered.
All my questions answered. 
I now know the truth,
The corruption of the youth.
Directing our eyes to the dead,
When we should be opening our ears to the living. 
Stop taking, and begin giving.
Life is just so short,
Try showing some support.
Stay kind, stay true.
Don't talk, Just do.
You could save a life,
You could stop someone from picking up that knife.
Veni, Vidi, Vici.
I came, I saw, I conquered. 

© 2012 Aurora Dawn


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Alexander the great said it and you put it in a nice poetic form...:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aurora Dawn

6 Years Ago

That was my goal:) haha
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)
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Posted 7 Years Ago


So much about the world and its cruel under goings of the present tense within 16 lines. I would say this writing is the work of a pure genius. Impressive work. Mind checking out my work?

-Writer *78*

Posted 7 Years Ago


Aurora Dawn

7 Years Ago

I'll be sure to check it out
Awesome! I like this one a lot!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Phillitup

7 Years Ago

:)
Phillitup

7 Years Ago

So much eloquence...
Aurora Dawn

7 Years Ago

(: Thank you.

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Added on October 18, 2012
Last Updated on October 18, 2012
Tags: Kindness, prevention, truth, youth, life, help

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Aurora Dawn
Aurora Dawn

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Hi. I'm Aurora. I just kinda write about anything at any time. If I have an idea I write it down and soon it blossoms. I like writing poetry and short stories mainly. Veni. Vidi. Vici. more..

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