The Crystal Perfume Bottle

The Crystal Perfume Bottle

A Poem by TKBickel
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For the Helena's Blue Rose Cafe Group special contest. Check out the group and try it yourself.

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Sunlight filtered through the perfume bottle,

creating a splendid rainbow presence.

 

Sadness retreated to a dark oblivion,

leaving a purer serenity through the glass.

 

Gifts from the sky are serene for a heart broken in two pieces,

discovering merciful peace.

© 2012 TKBickel


Author's Note

TKBickel
For the Helena's Blue Rose Cafe Group special contest. Check out the group and try it yourself.

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Yes. You are quite gifted a writer, are you not.

Posted 7 Years Ago


beautiful.........escpecial the last lines........glorious.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I love it when a writer can take a mundane subject or an everyday object, and make poetry out of it. The perfume bottle you pen about came to life for me. I felt that if I opened it up I'd find some fairy tale world within it. And oh yes..it smells good too. :P

Muse

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is so well done! I loved the vision of a rainbow through the perfume bottle, as light through a prism sends rainbows dancing around the room. It can indeed, lighten the heart.

Posted 7 Years Ago


TKBickel

7 Years Ago

Thank you for your nice review.
Crystal, faceted and gorgeous.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I am so amazed at the individual takes on this contest. With the limited words given every poet has put their own beautiful interpretation on paper so wonderfully. And yours is not exception! Well done poetess! Thank you for submitting this to Tovli's Ten!




Posted 7 Years Ago


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EMF
This is beautiful. Simply beautiful. No dancing. No twaddle. Beautifully done.
Yeah.
I Know. You're waiting for the gag.
There isn't one.
It is beautiful. Got the idea?

Posted 7 Years Ago


TKBickel

7 Years Ago

Can't see it from the shade of the brim.
EMF

7 Years Ago

And if it came to votes.... it would have mine
TKBickel

7 Years Ago

If I could buy one more word I would be happy but right now I shake my head at is thinking it’s ju.. read more

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Added on August 12, 2012
Last Updated on August 14, 2012
Tags: Contest, poem, Tovli's Ten

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