A Secret Lover's Rant

a one-sided love situation.

I still remember 

The times we're together

Our days spent with glee,

Happiness in our eyes they can see.

But now, I wonder what had happened?

Sparkle in those eyes had faded

My longing for our great tomorrow

Became an eternity of sorrow.

Everything we've been through

Never meant something to you;

All those things I thought will last

Suddenly vanished within my grasp.

'Coz my love is yours to gain

But your heart still beats other girl's name;

Nothing will ever be the same

My heart shattered by your hurricane..

Author's Note

Just a part of my painful past. Hope you liked it.. :)

Reviews

[Yari Garcia (Older Prof..]

"'Coz my love is yours to gain
But your heart still beats other girl's name;
Nothing will ever be the same
My heart shattered by your hurricane.."

This is definitely my favorite stanza. Though I would change only one thing. In the first verse you say "I still remember" (which suggests past tense) "The times we're together" (which suggests present tense). That made it a bit awkward to read for me.

Otherwise a good poem.

[Tai Ryens]

Such a lovely ending! Everyone goes through this once in their life, and something about the last stanza stood out to me. Another great write!

[goddess]

my heart shattered by your hurricane... nice:)