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A Poem by TTBoy28

 

Places and faces

 time and atmospheric revelations

Specificity connects what is above

 and below

so rightfully so

Taking only a quick moment as if

 a hazing fraternity pledging over one's

gave

Feeling touched by grace

 yet unable to define why

Why so-n-so made it

 

And not you

 

It just may not be your time

  Yet

 

Maybe

But a star is a star

 no matter how bright it shines

 after being aligned with another

© 2010 TTBoy28


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. oh gosh ... what a title and how brilliantly you justify it ... the composition ... the rendition ... and sheer profundity ... you are a star poet ... a rockstar, rocket poet ... the first five lines especially ... astonishing in word choice and expression ... you always inspire ...

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. oh gosh ... what a title and how brilliantly you justify it ... the composition ... the rendition ... and sheer profundity ... you are a star poet ... a rockstar, rocket poet ... the first five lines especially ... astonishing in word choice and expression ... you always inspire ...

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TTBoy28
TTBoy28

Atlanta, GA



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I am the former TTBoy. I am Buddhist. I write only the truth as I see it. This may sound ridiculous to some, but sometimes the truth gets in the way. The truth shall set you free. I try to be ad.. more..

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