Conjured New

Adding to the pot of whimsicle faith
prophecy waited around the corner while
pre-destiny stood front and center for the soul
he protected
He did his job
Next in line was supposed to be free will
but fate arrived on time and mocked life
Though when the going got tough
prayer was found when he fell to his knees
and salvation absolved all when evil tried to
beset the chosen with a gift otherwise considered
cursed for those whose eyes are opened too late
and for all the wrong reasons
in a garden meant for the foolish and indignant
Cultivating this newness
pleased not only the good spirits but the others
applauded
for they were of their kind naturally

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. ha ha ! ... i absolutely love the tone of this write ... and the way your words meander from one line to another and from one thought to another is just awesome ... if the good spirits applauded ... and so did others ... prayer was indeed found when he fell to his knees ... very intricate work ... the way pre destiny ... free will and fate are connected is simply too profound and only apparently simple ... and that line about fate mocking life is particularly amazing ... i am learning lots from you ... thank you ... :) ...