Love Lesson No.2

my pillow we shared
I kissed you where?
from head to toe

how you filled me 
full of love
your enlistee 
we made good whoopee

I wanted to cross my I's
dot my t's, love did me
loosed my screws 
took some bolts
treated me like an old coat

my love turn'd blue
other's haven't the clue
how you string'd me 
played this girl like a flute
til I came through 
and gave up on you.

Reviews

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Sometimes when we feel ignored or abused, we gave up on a relationship, no matter how long we have sacrificed for it.
Yet I believe when it is true love, the other party won't make you feel.that way. If you love someone you will always make him/her important, give time and effort for him/her.
Yes, this is a lesson in a relationship.

[ROXANE DORSEY]

true and thanks for a lovely review and read