Rain

Rain

A Poem by ROXANE DORSEY

Where there's gray clouds
rain entertains its wet games
hopscotch market parking lot
upset'n world trade
money fades no alcolades
rain has fangs
everyone twice bit'n
funnel clouds wild
curls and swirls spout
letting H2o out
snow & rain winter's wet fame
playing earth's game
of necessity

© 2018 ROXANE DORSEY


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i love the beat of this...the inferences to the storm of capitalism...nature entertains for free...but money enters into the picture of life...maybe by necessity, but its own storm makes such an imbalance in the nature and stature of human kind.
wow, wow, and wow to this piece of writing...
j.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Good one, I enjoy it, more ink to flow

Posted 2 Years Ago


A careful mix of metaphors turns this poem into something more than might be, it's quite a challenge - somehow sending a smile or two along with the invitation to think a little deeper. Perhaps!? 'Like what your mind unravels, Roxane!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Truly full of sparkling originality, especially when it's about an everyday experience! I like your little touches of exaggeration, such as rain disrupting world trade -- it's that kind of uninhibited thinking that pushes a poem into new realms of interest! Good word-sound-play, rhymes, & rhythm, too! *smile* Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Years Ago


I’ll have to get started reading more of your work as I really enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing, it is beautiful. Bravo!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Wow, really enjoyed the creativity you showed here... read this twice! Looking forward to reading more of your work. Excellent write!

Posted 3 Years Ago



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Added on March 7, 2018
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ROXANE DORSEY
ROXANE DORSEY

baltimore, MD



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love poetry since it has been embedded in my mind deeply way back when I was 4 years old. A very good reader in pre-school. Nursery rhymes tuned me in even deeper. more..

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