The Truth

I taught it would have been easier, but the truth gotta come out sooner or later.

I mess-up with you and i

i should be the one saying sorry and not you

you were just letting out your anger

ain't that true

It wasn't your fault for what came out

but you said sorry and for me i thought it didn't count

i always do this , i don't know what i want anymore

I don't even know what am living for.

I'm so lost why can't i be found?

why do i have to be down?

Writing this makes me cry

cause deep down i know i didn't try

i only push you away,

and i kept thinking you were gonna stay.

Tears keep forming in my eyes

cause i kept thinking it was all lies

but you told the truth bout your feelings

I don't know why i didn't believe you

i don't know why everything you say feels like

it ain't true.

Maybe because i always end up getting hurt,

maybe because am always the one left in the dirt.

I ain't asking for a relationship or a friendship

i' asking for someone who i know will be there for me

someone who i know that cares bout me

I'm really sorry

i hope you except me apology

Reviews

[Keith LaFountaine]

This is pretty good; you have a lot of great emotion set in the subtext. There are some GUM and spelling errors, so I would revise it a little bit, but overall this is a pretty powerful poem! :)