Tell Me With Your Eyes

Tell Me With Your Eyes

A Poem by TadKent

Just one more song in the TK collection.



Tell me one thing

I don't know about you.

I'll give you a list of things

you know I'd do for you


So cross your fingers

and we'll pretend

Everything is alright, because

Silence is your new best friend


Talk to me,

Tell me what I already know

You're thinking.

Look at me,

Tell me with your eyes

Are you listiening?


Girl I swear,

I thought I knew you better than this

It's so unfair,

Now what we all had seems so pointless


Oh I promise I won't bite.

I guess you're scared I just might

Lean in

whisper something in your ear,

maybe that song of hope

you don't want to hear,

That's too bad


Talk to me,

Tell me what I already know

You're thinking

Look at me

Tell me with your eyes

Are you listening?


That look you give me makes me


Instead of glaring won't you

Help me make this

B-b-b-better now,

Oh I promise it'll be worth it.

We all had so much,

don't make me forget it.


Talk to me,

Tell me what I already know

You're thinking....

© 2010 TadKent

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Author's Note

Want to hear it? go here: . You don't have to be a myspace member, just click it. Scroll down, and it's the video on the right. :)

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Featured Review

cute lyrics. And I LOVE that the Frames are your numero uno on myspace. =) You're a very talented writer. For once, I have no critique in a review... feels strange. lol. I would mention the rhythm, but I know it goes with the music, so... yep. I enjoyed reading. A lot. =)

Posted 12 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


oehhhh very cute lyrics!!

Posted 12 Years Ago

This is very beautiful, keep writing and don't stop! The lyrics are so sweet(:

Posted 12 Years Ago

i can really picture this being a song and it really makes me want to go and look it up. so im going to try to when ever i get the chance. this made a really good poem so it must be a really great song as well. im looking forward to reading more of your work and hopefully you will do the same for me :)

Posted 12 Years Ago

Good grief boy !! This is magical. Everyone just wants to hear it...not guess it....HEAR it ! You have explained and described this all too well here.
Fabby !!

Thanks 4 share
Babsie xx

Posted 12 Years Ago

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great lyrics..catchy..

Posted 12 Years Ago

The lines "Tell me what I already know you're thinking" are sheer brilliance. I can relate to moments like that. Very well done. You have a way of writing with simplicity that's loaded with a massive amount of passion. My kind of work. (:

Posted 12 Years Ago

So like the way this rolls down the hill, it flows consistently and really tells a tale.. it's a sad theme but the way it's written is more than fine.

Now to listen!

Had difficulty getting on, maybe to do with copyright infringements between UK and USA - will check on this.

Posted 12 Years Ago

an AWESOME musician, definitely. i love your voice :D

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on June 7, 2010
Last Updated on June 9, 2010
Tags: talk to me tad kent



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