Tell Me With Your Eyes

Tell Me With Your Eyes

A Poem by TadKent

Just one more song in the TK collection.



Tell me one thing

I don't know about you.

I'll give you a list of things

you know I'd do for you


So cross your fingers

and we'll pretend

Everything is alright, because

Silence is your new best friend


Talk to me,

Tell me what I already know

You're thinking.

Look at me,

Tell me with your eyes

Are you listiening?


Girl I swear,

I thought I knew you better than this

It's so unfair,

Now what we all had seems so pointless


Oh I promise I won't bite.

I guess you're scared I just might

Lean in

whisper something in your ear,

maybe that song of hope

you don't want to hear,

That's too bad


Talk to me,

Tell me what I already know

You're thinking

Look at me

Tell me with your eyes

Are you listening?


That look you give me makes me


Instead of glaring won't you

Help me make this

B-b-b-better now,

Oh I promise it'll be worth it.

We all had so much,

don't make me forget it.


Talk to me,

Tell me what I already know

You're thinking....

© 2010 TadKent

Author's Note

Want to hear it? go here: . You don't have to be a myspace member, just click it. Scroll down, and it's the video on the right. :)

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cute lyrics. And I LOVE that the Frames are your numero uno on myspace. =) You're a very talented writer. For once, I have no critique in a review... feels strange. lol. I would mention the rhythm, but I know it goes with the music, so... yep. I enjoyed reading. A lot. =)

Posted 12 Years Ago

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I absolutely LOVE this!
the lyrics are sweet.

Posted 12 Years Ago

Oh i i am going to check out this song..cause i would love to find out how it sounds when set to music..:),i am not a my space member though..but i will check it out nevertheless..
i like how you have repeated the lines..Talk to me,

Tell me what I already know

You're thinking....

Posted 12 Years Ago

This is amazing!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago

Sweet and soft- perfect flow. I love how you have such simple words that create such vivid emotions and pictures. Wonderfully done. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love the lyrics you used, and each stanza flowed nicely. I like the way you use some rhym in here to keep it alive and vibrant.

This poem is really sweet, and beautiful; you must have a talent for writing.
Here's a decent rating of 99/100, just because I'm feeling quite generous today.

Anyway, there's no spelling or grammar mistakes, so that's just great. I'm going to read more of your poems, so please review something of mine in return.

Posted 12 Years Ago

This was very wonderful. Everything fit together perfectly. I will watch the video when I can. So yeah. Great job. =)

Posted 12 Years Ago

well i am a myspace Member and this is my name on there Such a sweet piece makes me think of new and soft pure Innocent love so lovely thank you for sharing. god bless

Posted 12 Years Ago

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You're a very good song writer. And you can even preform them, you're very talented indeed.

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on June 7, 2010
Last Updated on June 9, 2010
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