Grey-Sky Lullaby

Grey-Sky Lullaby

A Poem by TadKent
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I was asked to write a song for a wedding. Here the resulting lyrics.

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I'll try this on with you

I'll write a song for you

Lay out this quilt on a hill

Listen for the birds as they

Sing that pretty story of

A girl who found a love that was real

It's ok, It's ok.

 

You'll put on that pretty dress

The one the crowd will like the best

White dress you'll only wear for a day

Then we'll see our families

You're smiling as you walk with me

The sky will watch the doves fly away

It's our day, It's our day

 

Oh, oh falling in love from the start

Oh, but now that I know who you are

I love you more

Breathe slow, honey oh darling we both know

I wouldn't trade you for a star,

I love you so

 

Oh, oh, falling in love from the start,

Oh, but now that I know your whole heart

I love you more

Breathe slow, honey oh darling we both know

I wouldn't trade you for the stars,

I need you so...

© 2010 TadKent


Author's Note

TadKent
I know the last two stanzas are almost identical, i just included both because one is sung softley, and one is belted at full volume. I didn't want to include only one because I didn't want the song to be too short.

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Oh, oh, falling in love from the start,

Oh, but now that I know your whole heart

I love you more

Breathe slow, honey oh darling we both know

I wouldn't trade you for the stars,

I need you so...

This is the sweetest lines I have ever heard. It was the best part of this whole poem. You're an amazing writer. please don't ever stop!!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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hmm
This is amazing! I love this.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This was sweet. I didn't realize from the title it would be a love song,but it was beautiful! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


This was beautiful. I love the simple nature of it- it captures the ease of falling in love.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sounds great, hard to imagine without some chords in here though, i don't know maybe its just me.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This song is devine and stunning.
Romance in every verse.
You sir can have girls becoming outty in your hands with this poem.
Great Job!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Now this is a song that one feels deep inside. It can make any firl fall to their knees weak and sighing.

Well done guy. I loved it..

Mags xx

Posted 9 Years Ago


As a girl, it's easy to purr for lines like these from a guy. Very romantic.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ohhhhhh TK. This is soooo dreamy and I'm sure anyone would love to have it sung to them. Great job here. You are quite the tallented fellow.

Thanks so much for delightful share....Will read more of your work tonight.

Babs xx

Posted 9 Years Ago


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songs repeat that is what makes them memorable..I think this is wonderful

Posted 9 Years Ago



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TadKent
TadKent

Fresno, CA



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