I'm just standing there

I'm just standing there

A Poem by Tali Katzman

I'm just standing there

Right in the middle

Between happy and sad

Between hope and despair

But as time passes

The tip is turned

It edges towards the dark side

Just because it's an easier path to go through

I'm just standing there

Right at the edge

Looking down at the darkness beneath me

All past memories ache in my subconscious

Make me feel regret

What's the point I think

As I look down into the bottomless pit

I'm just standing there

Inside the darkness

It envelopes me

Seeps into me

Into my heart and mind

Making me numb

And forget my memoires

Why am I this way?

Why be cursed by such a gift?

So I'm just standing there, wondering

© 2010 Tali Katzman


Author's Note

Tali Katzman
First time writing a poem,just wanted to let it out.

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First time writing a poem"...your this statement shows this's your first writin', if it is then i think you got what you wanted, yeah, that's pretty amzin' writin', loved it, your words're totally appropriate in your each poetric line, what a nice piece, i just read out after a day...by you...that's really very nice. "I'm standin' there,
Right in the middle
Between happy and sad
Between hope and despair...this startin''s pretty interestin' to read indeed...i saw that your this poem's a copyright of 2010. omg...Is it true...?????
if it is, that means i read out it here in 2013...great. what a nice piece.You should have to continue it, i wanna read more...
well written.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Great Poem! Many times I have stood exactly there! How did you know? lol!
Thank you for sharing!

Posted 9 Years Ago


I would have to say you let it out well.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Awesome poem, but why the change in font in the middle?

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is amazing!
This is my favourite poem i have read on this site.
You have so much talent.
I putting this in my favourites.


Posted 9 Years Ago


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We are often deceived by the "easier" way, but we must not fear pain and persecution, and instead take the narrow way. The Bible talks about this. I pray we all take the narrow way, because that leads to life.

Posted 9 Years Ago


what a coincidence ! my 2nd poem was based on a similar theme .. delusioned , knowing not what to do .. its a precarious situation to find oneself in .. should we let go or should we hold back -the eternal dilemma that ceases to bicker our troubled minds ..

keep writing !

Posted 9 Years Ago


Nicely done my friend. I like it alot!
you should read my poem The Edge
is kind of similar to this. Great write
Tali.......

Posted 9 Years Ago


good first time

Posted 9 Years Ago


Love it fantastical first attempt should right much more :)

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Tali Katzman
Tali Katzman

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I am a writer. Images race inside my mind and I just try to get them on paper.Music is my escape,helps me think and create a fantasy world. I write sci-fi/adventure/fantasy/fiction short stories.. more..

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