Shiny Moonlight Eyes

Shiny Moonlight Eyes

A Poem by The Turk
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A simple Haiku about an infant

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Shiny Moonlight Eyes
Lazily going asleep
Woken by the sun

© 2012 The Turk


Author's Note

The Turk
Like I said very simple but makes the beautiful eyes of infants that much more adorable

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So cute! :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


aww this reminds me of my baby brother :3 infants are so innocent and cute! great job :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Innocence prevailed. Simplified in the stanzas. Amazing how you brought it together and left the reader knowing just where you stand on your amazement. Write on

Posted 11 Years Ago


The innocence both protects and endangers. Not that reading this haiku will convince anyone of that... Nice write!

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on October 8, 2012
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The Turk
The Turk

Virginia Beach, VA



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I'm a 15 year old boy and I love to write and get all my emotions out. A huge problem for me are brain farts. It usually take a long time for me to get out of it. I hardly think that my writing is any.. more..

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