I miss you.

I miss you.

A Poem by Jane Doe


Some where up there your looking
Standing here beneath the stars
Wondering how long is the trip to mars
Will you be there?
Your long golden hair shadowing your face
Years passed by but I still cant say goodbye
And I still believe that I would be able to fly
But will I ever stop cry
Whenever I see him all I see in him is you
There in the school play ground
I see him different than all the kids in the crowd
A kid raised by an angel a mother I always longed for
Are u happy up there?
Oh how much I miss you
How much I pray to see you in my dreams
But I guess I sinned too much and have been deemed
Where you are seems to be as far as an eternity
Outstretched arms, open hearts,
if it never ends, then when do we start?
I'll never leave you behind,
And with a tear in my eye
Il scream it out loud Il never leave you behind

I dream away every night
Try so hard to disregard
the rhythm of the rain that drops
coincides with the beating of my heart
Oh how much I miss you.
And if you're up there ask god to give me the faith divine
While the thought of you takes the weal of my mind
 I drawn into consciousness
Gazing into the portrait of yours,
Thoughts rushing to my mind like an overdose
Here beside my bed is where I wish you lay
As pain fades away
So I lay here crying
And I lay here dying
Oh how much I wish I can turn back the hands of time
Bring back the old address "primetime"
Broken glass on the ground turns back into a window
Blood on the ground rushes back into your body
Travels to your head and all around your brain
Down to your chest and through your veins
Your soul slowly leaves like a wounded child
So I close your eyes and tell you goodnight
Hope you went to a better place that night
Standing alone in a dream
Where nothing is real
Wondering where have you disappeared
There were times I lost my way I was alone
Lost in haze where are you right now?
Il find you somehow
Because it hurts to be alone for such a long time
Alone such a fool with only my pride
When you don’t visit me at some nights
Id lay awake tossing and turning till day break
Where you are right now? Ill find you somehow

© 2009 Jane Doe

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A great tribute to your mother. Your pain of loss shines in this peice with much love.

Posted 11 Years Ago

This poem is heart wrenching! I feel your anguish... The loneliness of the night after a loved one leaving your side for so long. This is an amazing poem you have here. The emotion you give and express is immense. It is sentimental... but it is also wrought with sorrow. This is a wonderful poem you have here.

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Added on May 14, 2009
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Jane Doe
Jane Doe

I am eighteen years of age and growing up is my biggest fear. I am a total mess nothing in my life goes as planned , but I am content. I cant drink something if there aren't 3 ice cubes in it. if th.. more..