Dark soul

Dark soul

A Poem by tanaya

I use my poems to express my feelings so please comment!!!


Dark soul

Creeping up on me

No more light

No more happiness


Your dark soul

Sucks the life out of everything

No shred of light

None where you are


wrenching heart's from chests

Leaving only holes

Gaping holes

 nothing there


Your trail of dark souls

Left behind

No heart

No soul

No life


All because of you

I have no soul

I have no heart

Just a hole

A gaping hole




I need help



I can not live

You can not live

Not with out a soul


And you have ripped ours out

No more soul for us

No more happiness for us

No more life for us


Help us

Help us

© 2011 tanaya

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Seems he/she really hurt you deep, without heart we are empty, without soul we are alone. This poem really shows the emotion and the pain of a love lost. Keep em' coming

Posted 7 Years Ago

This seems deep and personal almost too personal to share but I 'm glad you did. Good job!

Posted 7 Years Ago

I like the poem. I like the flow of words and desire. Sometime we need to request help when we are falling. Thank you for a excellent poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago

Very interesting poem. Lucie

Posted 7 Years Ago

I think this is wonderful, very sad but still beautiful - I can feel your pain and fear and that cry for help really touched me

Posted 7 Years Ago

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5 Reviews
Added on October 25, 2011
Last Updated on October 25, 2011



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