Please daddy, Don't go

Please daddy, Don't go

A Poem by tanaya

 

Centre of my world

Stronghold for me

My dad

 

You have been there for most of my life

Through the good

And the bad

You have been there

 

We all make mistakes

We all do stupid things

But I don’t care

I love you

 

I need you

In my life

And in my heart

 

Daddy don’t leave

Daddy stay here

Daddy I miss you

 

Mummy forgive him

He has done some stupid things

But mummy please forgive him

 

Daddy I love you

Daddy I need you

Daddy don’t go

 

Forgive and forget

Its in the past

I love you no mater what

 

So daddy I need you

Daddy I love you

Please daddy, don’t go

© 2012 tanaya


Author's Note

tanaya
This is about when my parents split up and how even though daddy made some mistakes I still love him...

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This touches my heart because my mom and dad split up too. I the whole forgive and forget thing but I'm not sure if that ever works. With me I forgive but I never forget. This is a heartfelt poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


An honest and very moving write - venting and processing sadder times. Thankyou. Forgiveness is so important, I only wonder why it isn't highlighted more.

Posted 12 Years Ago



This poem is precious, heartwrending, beautiful. I hope that your wishes have been granted!

Wonderful....

Posted 12 Years Ago


Sometimes divorce is the best thing for two people when they can't get along with each other. It has nothing to do with the children, but the children are to young to understand that. Lucie

Posted 12 Years Ago


Aww, this is heartbreaking. I can relate, my parents divorced when I was 4, but it was my mother who made the mistakes. This is a very emotional and well written piece.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This was a well written, heartbreaking poem....

Posted 12 Years Ago


Hard for kids in a separation. A poem with painful emotion and sadness in the words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago



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tanaya

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