How can I help you?

 

Watching on

Helpless

 

Watching you cry

Watching you scream

And I am helpless

 

What can I do?

How can I help?

I have no idea…

 

Help me

Lead me on

Show me how to help you

 

Hearing you cry

Hearing you scream

Brakes my heart

 

We need one another

To help and love

We are alone

 

So I write this poem

To show how much I love

To show how much I care

 

To say

How can I help you?

Author's Note

Please comment!

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Great emotion in this poem. I like the offer of friendship and care. The poem could open the door to healing and friendship. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Sophie]

I like this! It's not my favorite of yours though, but it's still great :P

[No name]

Nicely done. Very thought provoking.

[Kenneth The Poet]

Stirs up some emotions.

[patricia]

great write, and a complicated subject too...since often knowing the right way to help can be difficult to discern...take me for instance...always doing for other's what they could do for themselves...so that isnt really helping as i think at all. Its called enabling in the modern world.
You get the emotions over in this poem very well. Thanks.

[Raven Starhawk]

I can relate to this as the words might as well come from my very soul.

[Shy Girl]

The feeling of helplessness is overhelming here in this piece. Not knowing what to do for this individual came from your heart..not just in your head. Very expressive poem :)

[Rose of Gondor]

TT.TT

So sad!!!!

[Alana McGuire]

This is very well written and expressive. :)

[olla]

very nice..