Do you really mean it?

Just a poem I wrote

 

Do you really mean it?

When you say its ok

When you say its all fine

 

Are you telling the truth?

Will we be whole again?

Will we be together?

 

When you say it

Do you know?

Or are you just assuring me?

 

Please don’t lie

Please don’t say these things

Mean what you say

 

Tell me the truth

I know it will hurt

But I need the truth!

 

So when you say its ok

When you say its fine

Do you really mean it?

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Ruth]

Everyone deserves the truth, this is real and that is why it hits hard, the emotions are yearnful here, lovely write xoxo

[Jordan's Back]

I like this because it shows the other side. We see too many poems about hurt on here, but we never see it from the loved ones point of view, The longing the need for them to Promise their going to be okay.....

Wonderful Write

[paradise]

I liek it very good write I like the way you make it look as though all bets are off so o questions are answered a poem of confusing and to the point loved it

[Kenneth The Poet]

Simple, and to the point.

[Broken Wings]

Nice write :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the desire to know the truth in this poem. We can feel when the words and touches become forced and untrue. I like the direct and honest words in this poem. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[omeridian]

nice :)

[Raven Starhawk]

Words can reveal great pain, anger and even be used to deliver questions for the unique desire for answers, but this was more than all of that. This was downright reading paradise because I can relate to every word penned.

[patricia]

if only we could make people be honest! needing them to be that for us is very dis empowering, I have learned that all expectations are pre meditated resentments. I look more at how they act than to what they say these days, but thats me getting into the story here, and really I should just be reviewing this from a less personal stance. Its a good piece of work. Thankyou.

[Cassie Fraga]

Reaching for answers... yes something we can all relate to. Truth can be so ugly sometimes but its what we all deserve, because at least with being in the "knowing" we can accept it and move on.
very well penned my friend!!