Your words hurt

WARNING: There is crude language in this. Poem a wrote... Kind of a vent

Worthless

Looser

Unloved

 

I guess I'm all that

You call me every name under the sun

Out me down to the ground

 

"materialistic c**t"

Just because I don’t want to go out in the rain?

"Go and cry"

Maybe I will, but do you care?

"don’t let your makeup run!"

It runs because you make me cry

 

After all I did

I was the only one on your side

I was the only one there for you

 

I risked my family for you

And this is how you repay me?

 

Degrading words

Making me feel worthless

Making me feel like I am nothing

 

Am I nothing to you?

Are my good deeds forgotton?

Replaced only with bad ones

 

You look at me and all you see are my mistakes

Was I a mistake to you?

Was I a bad investement?

 

If you don’t want me around

Just say so

Spare me the pain

 

Your degrading words

Your spiteful words

Your stabbing words

 

They hurt

They stab me deep in the heart

Where it hurts the most

 

Your betrayel to my heart hurts the most

I cared for you

I put my faith in you

 

And this is how you repay me

With degrading words

Putting me down

 

Well guess what,

Your words hurt!

They kill!

 

Ripping me apart inside!

Leaving behind a black hole,

Where my once broken heart rest

 

You broke a broken person

You tore me apart

I am nothing

 

Do you know how it hurts?

Do you realise,

Your words hurt!

Author's Note

Please comment!

Reviews

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

Deep pain emanates from your words here. Very well expressed.

[jennifer little]

wonderful poetry great job keep up the good work thanks for sharring with me

[olla]

dang.. passion over rides spell check.. sorry..

[olla]

words are the most powerful things in the world.. wars have been faught and great epic adventures and the softest whisper of a lovers kiss.. all will evolk a response when described in good words.. you have used good words..

when the heart speaks.. the soul listens..

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

I suddenly feel the urge to kick someone in the face.
Your words are extremely powerful.

[patricia]

the most touching line in this was...You broke a broken person.
An emotional poem, giving a voice to many who feel this way. Thanks.

[jimmy]

Wow Tanaya... I want to know what this is about, actually. But anyway, this was really great, and it showed your emotions perfectly. Good job. :)