Youv'e Scarred me

I have a song with this its called Scars by Papa Roach really great song! You should look it up!

 

I love you

I loved you

You hurt me

 

I believed in you

I trusted in you

You broke that

 

You drank

You got angry

You got mad

 

You had lost yourself

Who you truly were

I was scared for you

 

That look in your eyes

That crazed look

It haunts my dreams

 

You got out of control

You got aggressive

We had no choice but to call authority

 

Yet you come back free

I don’t know how to feel about that

Did you deserve it?

 

I don’t know any more

I don’t know who to trust

I don’t know who to love

 

It feels like the world is on my shoulders

It feels like a never ending darkness

It feels like hopelessness

 

Ive started to give up, loose hope

Ive tried so hard to forget

But its etched in my brain

 

That crazed look

That angry look

It haunts my dreams

 

No longer dreams

Now nightmares

All because of the one I love

 

Im scared of you

I don’t want to be

But I cant help it

 

I still love you

But im still scared of you

You’ve scarred me

 

No longer happy

Not that I ever really was

No longer carefree

 

Flinching at people yelling

Scared of people who are angry

You’ve done this to me

 

I love you

But I hate you

You’ve scarred me

 

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This poem highlights many of your skills as a writer. The imagery was haunting and the flow was spectacular, but I'd have to say that your unusual style of repetition was what made it so special for me. I found it to be rather violent. It hurts to face our sins and each stanza felt like being hit multiple times. It never let up. It was like a shower of frustration raining down on me. You hit us over and over with fierce emotion. I cant describe how powerful this work is. I am in awe.....

[tanaya]

Thanks :3 That means a lot to me :3

[Shelley Holt-Lowrey]

WOW! More of Tanya here than in others. Hope you are hanging OK over there. Part of me applauds you and your poetry.... the other part, which you pull out, is concern. You doing ok down under T?

[Coyote Poetry]

A lot of emotion in this poem.
"I still love you
But im still scared of you
You’ve scarred me"
When fear and love fall together. You will lose. A powerful journey into thoughts and fear. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote