Lost

Nature doesnt need people, infact, people needs nature.....

Ahhhhh.....what smell is it?
Its like the wet and moist mud
Or maybe the honeymoon suit
In the Niagara world

Its soothing me right away
like the honey attracts bee
Cant stop my mind to go in that way
to the sweet memories that always flee

Oh I'm loving it so much
It blows me up with every touch

The way the yellow flower sings, i don't know its name
And the way the green grass shine with a hidden flame

This morning it rained and now its gone
Its so silent now looks like a mother lost her son

but i cant see the rainbow anymore
All i can see is big factories and smoky tower zones

Oh i just forgot, I'm not living in that childhood nature heaven
Nowadays, this earth just became a huge workplace
where everything and everyone is busy in vain

Author's Note

love my poems or not....but plzzzz give some reviews.....i need to learn from my mistakes...

Reviews

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

I love the first three stanzas, but in the fourth you say: i dnt knw its name... Why don't you write : I don't know its name, why exterminate this beautiful vowels the English language has. Anyway it's a rather a good poem and I like it. :)

Rudi

[Tasfia Islam]

I'm surely gonna edit it.....and I'll try not to make the same mistake again.....thank you for the advice.... :)

[Nitesh Mahabal]

I believe everyone can connect to this piece of work, nice one

[Tasfia Islam]

Thank you very much

[Fariha Tahseen Karim]

niceeee...............cute and simple

[Tasfia Islam]

Thank you dear