We Are Broken

We Are Broken

A Poem by Kiara

You can fix a broken object,
But you cannot fix a broken person.
They'll always fall back apart again
And they'll usually hurt worse.
You just need to make sure they don't break any more,
Because there is a certain point where it becomes too late.
Is it too late for me?
Is it too late for her?
How broken do you have to be before you're thrown away?
Is that all we are?
I know she's more than that.
I may not be worth a thing,
But she's still shiny like gold to me.

© 2014 Kiara


Author's Note

Kiara
I'm talking about someone in particular, but I have the feeling she won't know it's her...

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i really like this piece, it's a great write tay, keep your head up hun. You are like a shining star to me (:

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nicely written great poem and no worries hopefully she realizes this.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is very well written and I have to thank you for writing this. I hope she reads this.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Doesn't matter if she doesn't realise it's her you're talking about. Your poetry belongs to you and it does its job beautifully. Well said!

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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My name is Taylor Bigelow, I am eighteen and I absolutely love my boyfriend, my cats, music, writing, and playing my trumpet. Some of the bands I listen to are: Pierce the Veil, Sleeping with Sir.. more..

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