Loud Silence

uhh. no idea what this is

Scream a whisper

And whisper your screams

As the room breaks out,

Shooting quiet guns.

Sing the silence,

Breaking the noise.

It's all we can do to end this Hell.

Author's Note

reviews?

Reviews

[Rasputin]

I'd say your description of this poem matched my reaction. It's not that I don't understand it, and I'm certainly not saying that I don't like it- I'm simply ambivalent to it. I thought the first verse was pretty strong, but the second seems bogged down in obscurity. It must have meant something to you, though, and that's what counts.