Agoraphobic

Agoraphobic

A Story by Taymour
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Fear of ....

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What a long nap!
I woke up suddenly, tried to stretch my body and stand up in my room.

‘’ouch... ’’
My feet hit the table in this extreme darkness, I decided to open the black curtains then I stopped…
Should I do this??
The outer scenes are terrifying!

Well, I must beat my fear; I will just let the sun to light my room.

I’m safe here.

The rays shined in my eyes, what a feeling…
Now I see the four sides of this room.

My street view always makes me sick.
Crowds are everywhere, driving their vehicles, and running in the main street.
Noise is forcing me to keep staying here, avoiding this disorder.

Chaos is absolute.

This is always surprising me; I wonder how these people could bear the whole burdens, bear this magnified disturbance.

Strange creatures riding weird manufactured metal sheet based on rubber disks.
Strange creatures running and killing each other for the sake of wealth that represented in some dirty pieces of colored paper.
How can they live in this risk? How can they sacrifice their safety?

There are a billion chances of getting murdered, to be injured, burned, or any dangerous possibility in this open society.

I’m scared of the whole idea of leaving my safe room and share those creatures in making such a crime to their souls.
I’m safe here.
I’m fine.
I turned my head down in my hands.
And suddenly I felt a hit on my head…

There was a huge bird knocking me and flew away, I gasped then I realized…
The safety element is no more valid.
I must find a better place.

What about the Closet??!!!

© 2010 Taymour


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thank you Hollywood, glad you like it, i will check ur work also =)

Posted 14 Years Ago


I really enjoyed this. It was entertaining[sp]. My favorite part was when you were describing the outside world in this perspective.
Good job.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on January 27, 2010
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Taymour
Taymour

Cairo, Heliopolis, Egypt



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so moody character, hesitating, and lonely... I like psychology, i like knowing much further about human soul, and how it reacts... I'm always laughing and being in a good mood with my friends. .. more..

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