WARNING: CONTENT IS VERY DISCRIPTIVE

EROTICA

I feel the cold chill against my bare skin.

It's cold shadow passes through my soul.

I feel it's hands move down my fragile body.

It holds me down as it passes through.

Penetrating me.

Our bodies move to the beat of our hearts.

We gradually move faster as our heart rate rises.

The screams and moans of joy, pleasure, pain, and fear.

And i let out a final Scream.

And when we stop.

We close the last remaining space between us.

His warm/cold chilling body lays pressed against mine.

My little pants slow to deep breaths.

I look into him eyes.

And all i see is darkness.

I try to scream.

But all that comes out is a gasp as I feel the Quick slash and blood immediately flowing. 

Reviews

[alan peter kelly]

Blood rush. The slash never hurts, even those that create beautiful scars, so long as they are quick. Blood has no other option than to bleed out fast. Pleasure is the element which would have made the experience completely bleak. Life is pain. Pleasure is to be savoured no matter how brief.

[David Wesley]

I like it. Some of your lines are quite bold. I think you can get away with that. You can be more descriptive though =P

[write4ever]

i loved this it was awesome

[SaraVelitol]

Very interesting. I'm impressed.